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Fight for the Mare!

Post  ForeverYoung on Wed Mar 25, 2009 4:18 am

Strider waited at the top of the hill. He spotted his opponent in the distance. He didn't care about his name or age. He just cared about winning this battle. He reared up in a rage and challenged his opponent.
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Re: Fight for the Mare!

Post  MajesticHooves on Wed Mar 25, 2009 4:20 am

Bahia stood well hidden in the trees. Was this fight really about her? It couldn't be. There was nothing special about her. Nothing. What did these stallions see in her that she didn't already? Bahia started to think. Nothing was thought of. She sighed and watched.
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Re: Fight for the Mare!

Post  ShannaraFox on Wed Mar 25, 2009 4:24 am

Lightning broke from the woods, he spotted Strider on the hill and his anger built. He reared and pawed the air, squealing and grunting and then letting out a loud responding challange. He knew some where in the trees was Bahia. the though made him even more angry at Strider.
Then as fast as his name sake he bolted up the hill to lock into a bloodly battle for the mare!


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Re: Fight for the Mare!

Post  MajesticHooves on Wed Mar 25, 2009 4:27 am

Prince saw the two stallions from the trees, too. He recognized Strider. Prince grunted and pinned his ears, "Fighting time," He thought, then he saw Lightning, about to challenge Strider. "Great" He muttered to himself. "I'll fight against Strider with this other horse!" He said to himself, then emerged from the trees and started bucking wildly, in Striders direction.
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Re: Fight for the Mare!

Post  ShannaraFox on Wed Mar 25, 2009 4:31 am

Lighting charged boldly into the red stallion, he did not bother with normal fighting, rather he used his small built to be quick and would rush in and bite at striders neck and shoulders then spin away and kick at strider with his hind leggs to jump and run beofre he got the full force of one of striders kicks.
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Re: Fight for the Mare!

Post  ShannaraFox on Wed Mar 25, 2009 4:34 am

A mare walked up to Bahia."oh you are so lucky to have two such stallions fight for you like they are!" She then took a deep breath and let it out in a dreamy state.
Then as if comeing out of a daze she looked back at Bahia, "Hello my name is River, what's yours so that I may use your name when I tell all the other mares about the glorious fight these fine stallions did for you!."
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Re: Fight for the Mare!

Post  MajesticHooves on Wed Mar 25, 2009 4:38 am

Bahia was puzzled. Two stallions fighting for her was not good. She frowned a bit. "Hi River.... I'm.. Bahia.. yes.. Bahia." Bahia said, not taking her eyes off the stallions.
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Re: Fight for the Mare!

Post  ShannaraFox on Wed Mar 25, 2009 4:44 am

"Humm yes the battle for Bahia, what one of these two fine stallions's blood will paint the ground tonight in your honor!" River looked at her, "Whats wrong? are you unwell?"
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Re: Fight for the Mare!

Post  ShannaraFox on Wed Mar 25, 2009 4:58 am

tire out your opponent! The words suddenly came into Lightning's head, they had been taught to him by the very stallion he was fighting. He had to try.
With a slip of movement he dodged a charge from Strider letting the weight and momentom of the charge carry the large red stallion dangeriously close to the hill edge.
Lightning braced and readyed him self for another charge.
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Re: Fight for the Mare!

Post  MajesticHooves on Wed Mar 25, 2009 5:13 am

Bahia stared. This could not go on! She galloped out into the battle field, it was risky but it was worth a try. Bahia stared at Lightning and charged straight to him, instead of crashing into him she swerved him and skidded, Bahia swung around she neighed like crazy and stood before him. She nuzzled his muzzle, "Your the one I love. I want to be with you. Your herd. Your protection. Your shelter. Your.. mate." She smiled, then licked his muzzle happily.
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Re: Fight for the Mare!

Post  ShannaraFox on Wed Mar 25, 2009 5:42 am

Lightning was so set on the large red stallion that he nearly missed the buckskin mare dashing tward him till she was right before him.
Her actions were so swift he hardly had time to think.
Her words held him dazed in place....had it been ture? had she really said those things? She love him? She wanted to become his mare? in his herd, with him for ever...his legs suddenly felt strong and weak at the same time.
He softly nuzzled her back, his breath comeing in fast puffs of air, he nickered softly to her then lifted his head to look at the red stallion.
Would strider accept the mare choice? would he press the fight on? Lightning could not read the mood on the big red stallions face, but he was terrably worried for Bahia.
He steped around her and gently nudged her futher out of the way, he didn't want to see her hurt. He looked back at the red stallion who was still standing watching with an un readable look on his face.
Lighting turned back to Bahia, "I love you. I would be love to be your mate and keep you safe for the rest of my days." He nuzzled her softly by her nose and mouth and by her cheek before turnign to see what the final choice from Strider would be.
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Re: Fight for the Mare!

Post  ForeverYoung on Thu Mar 26, 2009 2:01 am

Strider noticed their affections for each other. Yes, he was incredibly upset. But he has a way of hiding it. His eyes dimmed, but only for a moment. Immediately, he reared up, pressing the challenge onwards. "Fight!" He screamed. He raced towards Lightning at full speed. He ran straight into Lightning's stomach, both of them tumbling over down the hill. Strider lay on the ground for a few seconds, but he couldn't give up in the beginning. He got up and waited for a reaction from Lightning.
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Re: Fight for the Mare!

Post  ShannaraFox on Thu Mar 26, 2009 2:07 am

Lightning while not know for his size, height or stringht was very good at speed and agillity. He landed hard in a mess of hooves with Strider. Though his body was sore he lept to his feet to brace him self for what strider would do next.
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Re: Fight for the Mare!

Post  ForeverYoung on Thu Mar 26, 2009 2:18 am

Strider suddenly remembered this was one of his students. He paused for a moment, knowing that he had given away a useful piece of advice. He stepped back, hoping that lightning would come for him. Instead, he dashed straight for Lightning, purposefully making him strike for defense.
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Re: Fight for the Mare!

Post  ShannaraFox on Thu Mar 26, 2009 2:32 am

Lightning struck at the chargeing stud, but his blow was mesuraed and controlled. He missed most of the impact by nimbly jumping out of the way. Still he knew better then to under estamate this firey red stallion who's name was known all over the mountain. Lightning didn't want to fight him but wouldn't give up Bahia either.
He spun on Strider and blasted him twice with his hind feet before bounding out of the way.
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Re: Fight for the Mare!

Post  ForeverYoung on Thu Mar 26, 2009 2:43 am

Strider reared up and got Lightning in the right place to brain. Exactly the right place to strike him in the head. He couldn't do it. He just couldn't do it. He knew how ashamed everyone would be. But he could never strike one of his students. What if he could have killed him? It would never stop haunting him. Strider got all fours on the ground and only said to simple words. "I for-fit." He walked away and stared at the mare he had just given up. He focused on the course in front of him and started up the rocks.
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Re: Fight for the Mare!

Post  ShannaraFox on Thu Mar 26, 2009 2:51 am

Lightning watched him go. That had been close, way too close, he had seen the death blow comeing and couldn't move fast enough.
Lightning knew he would not have won this battle...Strider truly was a proud amazing stallion. Some day Lightning would have to go to his herd and tell him so. He would have done so now but he could see the stiff set to Striders neck and shoulders, he knew that Strider was battleing back his own urge to return and fight, now was not a good time to thank him.

Lightning stood for a moment then trotted up the hill to Bahia. "He for-fits." He told her. His body hurt, and there were rips and cuts in his white hide that was now smeared with blood as well. Lightning wanted to laugh, he now looked more pink then white.
He stood close to Bahia, and nickered softly to her and genly rubbed his sore tired neck along her warm soft side. "Come, lets leave this place and fine some where where I can rest."
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Re: Fight for the Mare!

Post  ForeverYoung on Thu Mar 26, 2009 2:56 am

Strider halted and turned around to find Lightning and his prize heading off to one of the other valleys. He disappeared over the mountain. As soon as he was out of sight, he collapsed instantly and lay there. Silent. Motionless.
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Re: Fight for the Mare!

Post  ShannaraFox on Thu Mar 26, 2009 3:00 am

"Hello Stranger." a soft dainty voice said. "That was quite a battle, is there something I can do to help you now?"
The mare a deep brown chestnut with a flowing white main and tail stepped around him and looked at him. Her eyes were shining in the night.
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Re: Fight for the Mare!

Post  ForeverYoung on Thu Mar 26, 2009 3:04 am

Strider did not manage to get a look at who the stranger was. But her voice was incredibly calming. "It was nothing more than a coward's display..."
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Re: Fight for the Mare!

Post  MajesticHooves on Thu Mar 26, 2009 3:06 am

Bahia nuzzled Lightning softly. She examined his wounds. "I shouldn't have looked at Strider today.. none of this would of happened!" She thought to herself. Bahia glanced over at Strider, she felt bad for him. Bahia nuzzled Lightning again, then trotted over to Strider and nuzzled him. "I'm truly sorry I laid eyes on you. I meant to cause you or Lightning no harm." She nickered, then looked over to Lightning to make sure he was not angry at her for going and talking to Strider.
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Re: Fight for the Mare!

Post  ShannaraFox on Thu Mar 26, 2009 3:07 am

Her gasp was soft and pure, "Oh no no no no, not yours. You are no coward! I have seen cowards and you are not one. You were great, every one saw that you had nearly won the fiht and the mare was yours.... oh surly you do not mean you are the coward!"
Her soft voice was worried and filled with disbeleife.
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Re: Fight for the Mare!

Post  ShannaraFox on Thu Mar 26, 2009 3:09 am

Lightning watched Bahia go over to Strider, he was not overly worried, at least not about her being near him, he was a bit on edge though for if Strider changed his mind it would be easy for him to claim her right then and there.
Lightning hung his head some, he was a coward. He had alowed Stirder to back out when every one there knew who would have won....
He was hot, tired and sore and soooo confused.
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Re: Fight for the Mare!

Post  ForeverYoung on Thu Mar 26, 2009 3:12 am

Strider listened to her wonderful voice. "What is your name?" He still hadn't bothered to look up at her. He had truly forgotten his pride.
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Re: Fight for the Mare!

Post  ShannaraFox on Thu Mar 26, 2009 3:16 am

She didn't answer, in stead she told him that another mare was comeing to speak to him. She tood back and quietly let Bahia make her apoligys to Strider.
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