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Post  ProKid on Thu May 07, 2009 2:06 am

Melody trotted towards Black Crystal. "I am Melody. May I know the name of this dashing stallion?" She questioned, flicking her tail.
Melody's gaze was fixed on the handsome, young stallion. Her mane fell over her her eye and she shook her head gently. Melody brushed her muzzle gently against Black Crystal's in a form of greeting, hoping he would not mind.
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Post  BrumbyRider on Fri May 08, 2009 2:50 am

Black Crystal's nostrals flared as he took in her scent, so sweet, like wildflowers, honey and another bautiful unique scent was blended. He blinked his pure black iruses and bowed before the mare, his mane shifting in the slightest breeze. ''Tis a true honor to meet you fair lady, thy name, answering your question, is Black Crystal, and thy would be honored to by at thee's service, if thee wish.' He added afterwards, speaking perfect shakesper-ian.

White Gold flicked his tail and stomped his hoof, he stood square before his sire, glaring at his sire's pure gold flecked with darker gold eyes. His sire snorted in disgust and tossed his silver mane so it flowed freely over his golden coat.
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Re: White Gold. Legendary Stallion.

Post  ProKid on Fri May 08, 2009 6:38 am

Melody, smiling sweetly, replyed to Black Crystal, "No need for that, but thanks anyway,"
Melody was impressed with this stallion. He was a fine, handsome and young stallion --- absolutely perfect. Melody, neck arched and tail high, stood firm, watching the black stallion.
Melody shifted her gaze towards the other horses nearby. She glanced at Black Crystal, "Who are they?"
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Post  BrumbyRider on Fri May 08, 2009 6:45 am

'The cremello, 'tis my full brother. The palomino 'tis our---' black crystal broke of as he spotted his sire, he gasped and excused himself. He walked to his sire, 'Hello, father.' He said bluntly.
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Re: White Gold. Legendary Stallion.

Post  pinto on Fri May 08, 2009 6:56 am

Sand and Sky looked over at the palomino stallion
Crystal Sand looked at the palomino intently
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Post  BrumbyRider on Fri May 08, 2009 7:00 am

'Foolish Colts!' The palomino's voice bellowed and echoed off the cliffs. 'You two are here playing with fillys when you are supposed to be with Kristy!! Foolish, Stupid colts!' He cried out.

Both stallions flinched at his words.
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Post  ProKid on Fri May 08, 2009 7:06 am

Melody wanted to say something. She looked back at Black Crystal, wondering if he would mind. Melody was flaring up. She did not want to do something that might cause Black Crystal to dislike her. Melody gave a silent sight, still looking at Black Crystal..
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Post  BrumbyRider on Fri May 08, 2009 7:17 am

'Thing is father, im sick of being tame... I belong here and here's were I'll stay.' Black Crystal kept his cool yet his skin was twitching with rage.

'Kristy lets us run on free will. She know's we cannot be owned, yet she loves us. That is why we come back. Yet you, you are afraid of change, you STUPID TAME BEAST!' White Gold almost kept his cool but ended up screaming in rage at his sire. kicking out his legs behind him, he went tearing the clearing at a furious gallop. He swirved around and charged at his father, teeth bared. It was all a bluff. he could never kill his father yet hurt him he would if he had to.

The palomino stallion flinched at his colts words and returned the teeth bared gusture and reared and put on a show that he and his son starred in.
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Post  pinto on Fri May 08, 2009 7:19 am

Crystal Sand stared at the stallion, surprised at his words
Crystal Sky shook her head at the palomino stallion and snorted and strted grazing
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Post  BrumbyRider on Fri May 08, 2009 7:23 am

White Gold clashed with his father with enough force that sent them both flying. They tumbled on the grass and White Gold tore at the soft turf as he struggled to his feet.

The palomino stallion rose and charged his son, his hooves meeting White Golds fleshy chest. White Gold fell and coughed blood, he rose again and let out a blood curdling scream of rage and pain as the torn skin was stretched as he moved to his sire, teeth bared and held to the stallions thick neck by his teeth.
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Post  ProKid on Fri May 08, 2009 7:24 am

Melody watched the two stallions. "Can't somebody do something?"
She was not fascinated nor delighted with this. She wanted to stop the fight before it got worse, but what could she, a mare, do? Melody took a step back and raised her head. She let out a ear-piercing neigh. She had not wanted to take the risk, but she had to or take on another risk of two stallions, at least one getting severely injured, or worse still, killed.
Maybe she was foolish to have done it, or perhaps the stallions would ignore her. But she knew she had tried and she will not regret it.


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Post  pinto on Fri May 08, 2009 7:26 am

Crystal Sky flinched asshe watched, she wanted to break up the fight so badly but knew she shouldn't
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Post  BrumbyRider on Fri May 08, 2009 7:30 am

White Gold got slightly distracted and when he was, his sires left hoof struck his right cheek with a splintering crack, white gold fell limply to the ground. the stallion snorted, screamed and galloped away.

Black crystal stood in shock, watching his family tearing each other apart. They had fights but none this bad. He stood shivvering as he watched in slow moton as his father killed his brother.

(Ok White Gold ain't dead but Black Crystal thinks so.)
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Post  pinto on Fri May 08, 2009 7:34 am

Crystal Sand looked at White Gold, horror struck and she took a few steps toward him, neck stretche d
out toward him
Crystal Sky didnt move , she was now frightened and took a step back
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Post  ProKid on Fri May 08, 2009 7:37 am

Melody's body shook. She stood paralysed in shock, but regained her composure before long. She cantered towards Black Crystal, nudging his shoulder, "Come on!"
Melody trotted over to White Gold, lowering her head to examine the stallion, keeping a distance in case he suddenly awoke or something. He was breathing, heavily. Melody calmed down a little, now knowing that White Gold was still alive.
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Post  BrumbyRider on Fri May 08, 2009 7:43 am

Black Crystal woke and stumbled to his brother. he fell to his side and laid his head on White Golds neck.

White Gold's coat twitched and he lay, shivering on the ground. he coughed two sharp peircing noises that were choked off by a flow of crimson blood.
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Post  pinto on Fri May 08, 2009 7:44 am

Crystal Sand stopped and took a step back, not wanting white gold to get too crowded
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Post  ProKid on Fri May 08, 2009 7:46 am

"He'll be alright," Melody tried to console Black Crystal, but her voice shook, which proved she was as fearful as well.
Melody nuzzled Black Crystal comfortingly. Instinctively, she galloped off into the distance, in search of a lake or river for water to wash White Gold's wounds.
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Post  BrumbyRider on Fri May 08, 2009 8:07 am

Black Crystal stood and reared over his brother.
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Post  pinto on Fri May 08, 2009 8:21 am

Crystal Sand and Crystal Sky watched
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Post  BrumbyRider on Fri May 08, 2009 8:44 am

White Gold fluttered open his crystal blue eyes. They were covered by a thick sheet of mist that no matter how many times he blinked he could not see past.

Black Crystal stood over him, broud chest puffed out.
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Post  ProKid on Fri May 08, 2009 11:08 am

Melody took no longer than a moment to retrieve some water for White Gold to clean his wounds. But she just stood a distance from where the brothers were, eyeing them closely. Melody stood still, calm as ever and her muscles relaxed. The brothers did look alike, except for their completely opposite coat colours.
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Post  BrumbyRider on Fri May 08, 2009 7:59 pm

Black Crystal nudged White Gold as his brother heaved and dragged himself to a stand.

White Gold stood before his brother and the mares. His flesh oh his chest hanging in thick slabs and blood pulsed out of the hoof imprint on his cheek. He tasted the matalic and salt of it as it streamed over his lips and dripped in large droplets to the ground. He stood supporting most of his weight on his back legs, his forlegs only touching the ground. He arched his neck and nodded to his brother and the two mares, he then saw Melody and bowed awkwardly in thanx, hiding the pain.
He then liped/hopped off awkwardly towards the forest.
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Post  pinto on Fri May 08, 2009 8:11 pm

Crystal Sand took a step toward White Gold but then stopped, letting him have his space
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Post  BrumbyRider on Fri May 08, 2009 8:14 pm

White Gold grunted silently and fell to the fground once in the trees. He stretched his neck and closed his eyes.

Black Crystal nodded back and sighed.
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